this is the work that I've been doing on prototec. I did 12510s time tables.
this is my learning g of counting cars. I did 0 counting to 1000 |
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday 19th November I went to the south of New Brighton and had a giant race. When I got in the race there were hard obstacles and there was one obstacle that I hated it was going through the cold water with my shoes on. It took me 30 minutes to get to the finish, I came 10th place in our hole school but Cody and William were the first two to finish the race. The most fun obstacle I did was the BOOM! slipping sliding foem then I had some lunch I had a cheeseburger from mc: donilds my mum gave me it. We did 1.8 km of running, after that, we went to the new Brighton beach and learned about being a safe swimmer and lifeguarding. The swimming I did was dolphin flipping and shark diving, finally, we went on the bus and went back to school, we sang wheels on the bus at the end.
The connections I made to this title was a cloud was lonely
The tone of this poem was it felt sad and the rhyming pattern was ababcc was in all of the stanzas
I found some simile in the first stanza 'I wandered lonely as a cloud, 'I found some hyperbole golden daffodils and' I found some personification fluttering and dancing in the breeze and the waves beside them danced.
there were 4 stanzas 6 lines and rhyming
MY LINK TO MY TE REO BOOK.
https://read.bookcreator.com/6N0Pb8dU5CUKRl75hmllQsPBR2t2/gRDsvmeWTTSHuy_C_FWFNQTHE CONNECTIONS I MADE TO THE TITLE WAS THAT THE POEM WAS ABOUT BEING ABONDED. THE MEANING I MADE TO THE POEM WAS A BIRD HAVING A BROKEN HEART. THERE ARE 3 STANZAS, 7 LINES, AND THE RHYMING PATTERN IS ABAABCC FIRST ABAABAA SECOND ABAABCC THIRD. THE POETIC DEVICES I FOUND IN THE POEM WERE ALLITERATION, SIMILE, PERCONIFERCATION.
THE CONNECTIONS I MADE TO THE TITLE WERE A SOLDIER RETURNING FROM WAR. HES TALKING ABUOT THE GUY WHO HAD A LOT OF INJURIES AND THE GUY WHO NEVER GIVES UP. THE POETIC DEVICES IN THE POEM ARE SIMILE PERSONIFICATION ALTERATION AND HYPERBOLE.