I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Harlin. I am really pleased to see that you have started to develop your mihi. It would be great if you worked on it throughout the year and then recorded it again to show your progress and improvement. There are a couple of things that we can change to help you get your mihi even better. You have done a great job with your pronunciation and reading it aloud. Ka pai.
Hi Harlin. I like the Pronunciation. it would be great if you worked on it throughout the year. You have done a great job. Maybe next time try to do it faster and without stopping in between some of them.
Kia ora Harlin.
ReplyDeleteI am really pleased to see that you have started to develop your mihi. It would be great if you worked on it throughout the year and then recorded it again to show your progress and improvement.
There are a couple of things that we can change to help you get your mihi even better. You have done a great job with your pronunciation and reading it aloud. Ka pai.
Hi Harlin. I like the Pronunciation. it would be great if you worked on it throughout the year. You have done a great job. Maybe next time try to do it faster and without stopping in between some of them.
ReplyDeletei really like how you tried your best harlin.
ReplyDeletemate your better then me!
next time you could work on trying to speak up.
but i think 10 out of 10!